OK, we've been investigating this issue for a few days now, but I'm too tired to write it all up. Anandtech will be mentioning this issue in their review.
You guys should make sure Search Indexing is completed/paused when you run tests. Search for "Indexing Options" -> make sure it says "Indexing complete". If not, hit Pause. Then, re-run the tests. SI runs like wild for the first few days of getting a computer and will muck up any SSD performance tests.
But, actually, there are some serious issues going on with the SSDs and it looks like hardware. The short version is that all of you have Samsung SSDs, the TLC-based PM951 drive. It's a really weak drive in terms of writes, especially the 128GB model. A spinning hard disk writes faster than the PM951 128GB--it's not software. Samsung rates it at only 150MB/s sequential writes.
We've got lots of evidence. I'm too tired to re-write it all--Anandtech will give a better report. But, just read these threads:
http://forums.windowscentral.com/microsoft-surface-book/390898-nvme-ssd-very-slow-write-speeds.html